Hi Client, when are you coming?

[9486af42]

At the early days, it's more about hello amazing freelancer when you are reaching out to client 😄 

[spxpert]

Client's don't know you exist in the Upwork Metaverse.  Make yourself visible,  ask yourself "Why should they come to you?"

[elisa_b]

In all honesty, if I were a client I would find your profile too hard to read and I would also be discouraged by the initial "Hail, Esteemed and Noble Entrepreneur!" greeting.

Believe me, no one is going to read all your bullet points. You put a lot of effort into trying to be engaging and original in your profile, but I think that is too much above the lines.

Keeping things shorter and simpler could be best for you, if you want to catch a client's attention without visually overburdening them.