I'd love to get my profile reviewed.

[mrarpitjain]

Hello Upwork Fam,

I've recently joined upwork and would love if someone could review my profile.

I'm open for every kind of suggestions 🙂

Regards,

Arpit

[mrarpitjain]

So no one is interested ! 

[mwiggenhorn]

When a client sees your profile (also your proposal), they only initially see the first two lines.  Use those lines to sell your expertise and experience - push the bullet points further down.

Lose the free 30 minute consultation language - that's an interview and the way you phrased it sounds needy.

And lose the 100% language.  You don't have a JSS yet so I'm not sure what that refers to.

Overall, your profile looks good.  Remember that things are pretty slow this time of year, so make some changes and don't get discouraged.  Best of luck in the new year!

[mrarpitjain]

Ohh Thank you soo much Mary for your review.

Just to be sure "push the bullet points further down." which bullet points did you mean the one quoted with Star symbol ? 

[mwiggenhorn]

You are just wasting space with the bullet point.  Also with introducing yourself.