Regarding first job

[atulshandilya78]

i am  a member since 2019.till from i did not get any job.even i submitted many proposals.i perchased conects also but all ruined.i am not understsnding what is wrong with me or my Profile.is there is anybody who can assist me.

[martina_plaschka · Accepted solution]

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Atul S wrote:

i am  a member since 2019.till from i did not get any job.even i submitted many proposals.i perchased conects also but all ruined.i am not understsnding what is wrong with me or my Profile.is there is anybody who can assist me.

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1. Get a different picture - friendly and smiling

2. Too many punctuation errors for somebody offering data entry 

3. Your overview is repetitious

4. No greeting, hi or otherwise, go straight to your skills

5. Never say you're honest or similar, that is expected and does not require mention