Hi Annie,
I read through your profile and I have some thoughts about how you can improve it. First, I will tell you what I see wrong (and why) and offer suggestions for improvement.
Personal: Your summary includes a lot of personal attributes (i.e., passionate, dedicated, eagerness, etc.) These sound great, but clients rarely care about personal qualities, so I would not include them. Instead of saying: "I am a passionate and dedicated new article writer and freelancer eager to make my mark in the world of content creation." I would say: "I am a skilled article writer eager to help you create exciting and meaningful content."
Being New: You mention being a newcomer--something else clients rarely care about. Clients want results and if you have the qualifications, skills and abilities to meet their needs, they will be happy. Many clients will not care if you have 5 years of experience or 15 years of experience; they want quality results. With that, I would remove any comments about being a "new freelancer" or "new article writer."
Understanding: One of the most important things to do in your summary and your overall profile, is to tell clients what you do and how your services will get results. Clients need to understand what services you provide and what that means to them. You say you're a Nutritionist by profession and a writer by passion. Nothing wrong with that, but what does it mean for clients? Are you clients getting an article writer who happens to be a Nutritionist, or are they getting a Nutritionist who writes articles focused on health and nutrition?
If you are offering health and nutrition article/content writing services, you should specify that. You need to tell clients that you write informative nutritional articles, healthy menus and eating habits, or health-related food and nutrition content designed to promote good health and manage disease. Right now, there is no connection between your nutrition expertise and your article-writing. If you plan to write articles (no matter the subject) then mentioning your nutritionist background may not be too interesting to potential clients.
Portfolio: You should consider adding a portfolio to showcase sample writing. The portfolio is a chance to make a positive first impression on potential clients, and clients often like a visual representation of work. If you don’t have relevant examples to add to your portfolio, you can create items that demonstrate your writing skills.
I think that's it for now. Once you revise your summary, it will be shorter and more informative for clients.
